This evening's view from the elevated subway train

Fluffy coral clouds float in a pale blue sky
In just about half an hour, the sun will say goodby

('Tis long gone, but it took me a while to get home
and post this miniature tome :) )


Man, I gotta start carryin' a notebook--this is something like the fourth poem I've written in my head on the subway since roughly February (and the third one today). The original draft of that February one is still on the only scrap of paper I could find in my backpack at the time.